Focus group - Upper school consent

As we have chosen to include some of the upper school in our focus group, we have to ensure that we aren't crossing any school guidelines as we will be filming the discussion and posting it on our blogs meaning that they will be online. Therefore, we have had to write a letter to send home to the parents of the year 10's and 11's as they are under 16 so parental consent will have to be gained.
We wrote out the letter and then gave it to the school office so that they would print it on the official school paper.
In the letter, we wrote about:
-What we are doing and why
-That their children would be taking part if they consent
-That the focus group will be recorded and so their children will be featured in a video being posted online
-Asking for their permission and for them to sign

Here is the completed letter we will be sending home to the parents: